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 In Manukau at my Aunty's birthday

On Saturday morning my family and I drove to Manukau. We were driving to my aunty’s 21st  birthday. Her 21st wasn't till the afternoon so we waited at my uncle's house.

I saw my cousin. I walked inside. I saw glue on the table and when I walked in to the kitchen I saw some activator.

I asked my uncle if me and me and my cousin could make slime. My uncle said, “Only if there is enough glue.” 

We had two bottles of glue full so he said, “Yes.”

Then we had to go to my aunt’s 21st.

We sped off. We drove to my aunt's mum's house. We went inside and shouted, “WOW!!”  “There is the birthday girl,” I yelled out loudly.

She looked so pretty.

Two minutes later my papa and nana arrived. I ran out to my papa and nana and gave them a big hug because I hadn't seen them for nearly 2 weeks. The adults said we 

had to go. I yelled, “I’m going with my papa and nana.” We drove off. We beat my mum, dad and my two twin brothers. I said, “Haha.” They laughed at me then we all started laughing. It was funny because I sounded sarcastic. First we waited outside. My papa was having a smoke. My nana said, “I'm going inside.” I said, “I’m coming with you.” I was so excited to see the cake.  

Next everyone came inside. After that we sang happy birthday. My aunty's Jaid and Paris did a haka. I joined.l was exezoseded I was tiered I had a great day.